I am lying on my back under the lilac tree. The sun is hot on my face, pricking my skin, like a thousand tiny needles. Heat is pouring into me like sand from a jug, weighing me down. I can see the inside of my closed eyelids, thin, pink lines race across the bright orange glow. Intense flashes of light make my eyes hurt as the sun filters through the purple flowers. The grass feels cool under the palm of my hands and slightly damp. Every so often, the flashes become too intense, and I sit up and open my eyes. The world is drenched in deeply saturated technicolour. The grass is creme de menthe, the flowers are bubblegum pink and Lego yellow. The sky is a deep, clear metallic blue, criss crossed with fluffy white vapour trails.
In the distance I can hear cheering from the football stadium, the sounds rising and falling on the breeze, sometimes obscured by the hum of mowers and shrieks of children playing. Somewhere, an ice cream van is playing its tinkling tune, urging us to come and buy. I lie back down and close my eyes, the sounds washing over me and the heat pinning me to my patch of grass under the tree. I could stay here forever.
This is my interpretation of the DIY writing workshop prompt ‘Summer’.
Wow, very good description of an English summer’s day (well one when the sun shines anyway). xx
Doesn’t it always shine?
I would be more than happy to join you!
There’s a little spot, right here. Come and lie down.
A lovely evocative piece! I can see, hear & smell of those English summer things!
Thanks. Short and sweet this week.
oh me too….can we play dizzy ducks and stay forever? x
if you like x
Love this Vic… I was there with you 🙂
Here… *passes an ice lolly*
This was like I was there! Fantastic description, the look the sounds… really great, succinct writing. I really enjoyed this.
thank you, short and sweet this week, not so much burbling on…
I love all the colours you describe – creme de menthe green and lego yellow and bubblegum pink. Great! I really felt it.
I was rather pleased with Lego yellow.
I love your descriptions of all the colours. So emotive. Really lovely x
Thank you 🙂
Just gorgeous. This captures everything i adore about summer.
summer come back!
It’s just a bit too windy today for lying on the lawn.
What on earth do you mean that you didn’t do it as well?!
This is BRILLIANT. Beautiful and vibrant and alive and flowing with meaning and gorgeous metaphors.
I love it. Now shut it you and go write some more x
Yeah yeah yeah. Whatever. As I believe the youth of today say.